The basic elements of the paragraph are fairly strong.
There are some minor points that need to be fixed.
Hi friends! (Punctuation mark
needed.) Last Saturday, (comma included) I attended a meeting. (Full stop because the
next sentence is an important idea.) I was handed over printed notes, (comma included)
instructions on to how to work and what they want on their websites (eliminated extra
preposition). I found (past tense) that there were (tense) many errors in the document
and misrepresented (tense) some items (eliminate conjunction) which I must modify. I am
looking for a good online site where I can upload the scanned document and convert it
into an editable format. I am sure someone on this platform can point me to a right
site. (Full stop). Thanks in
advance!
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