Your question calls for an "end" to your essay, but then
            suggests that you need "more."  Be careful.  A conclusion is different from another body
            paragraph.  If you need to introduce a completely new sub-topic, you are simply adding
            additional information and will also need a separate conclusion.  From the sound of the
            points you have covered, your essay seems to be thorough.  If it is for lack of enough
            words/pages to meet a requirement, at this point, you have a couple of
            options.
The first option is to go back and look for places
            to include additional examples and elaboration to the body paragraphs you have already
            written.  Another idea is to add another subtopic that is different from those you
            have.  You talk about "cures" but what about complications?  What is life like for those
            who live with this disease?  Is there anyone famous who has suffered from this disease
            that you could talk about as a special interest
            section?
When you are ready to fully
            end your essay, you will sum up the  main points you have made (essentially
            restating your thesis in a slightly different way) and leave the audience with something
            to think about.  See the link below for some general advice about
            conclusions.
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